close your eyes

[tvsatman]

this was a time i was deep in thought

let me know what ya think

i close my eyes
i float my mind disapears,
i can overcome reality
ridding all my worries my fears

taking flight with the birds
or swimming with the fish,
i can make anything come true
wishing all i can wish

i can make time stand still
i can turn back the clock,
make peace with the angels
or meet the devil and rock

what a wonderfull world
the ability to disapear,
creating my own space and calm
without the glimmer of fear

i can create all these journeys
all these places in my head,
but its made me tired and sleeply
time to go off to bed.

regards paul

[Kevo the poet]

Ha love the ending!!!

Intersting piece again Paul thanks for sharing with us.

After much consideration i say thumbs up lol...

[octobermadness]

great imagination love the simplicity of the piece

[Daisy]

Wonderful imagery Tvsatman!

[Alistair]

Originally Posted by tvsatman

this was a time i was deep in thought

let me know what ya think

i close my eyes
i float my mind disapears,
i can overcome reality
ridding all my worries my fears

taking flight with the birds
or swimming with the fish,
i can make anything come true
wishing all i can wish

i can make time stand still
i can turn back the clock,
make peace with the angels
or meet the devil and rock

what a wonderfull world
the ability to disapear,
creating my own space and calm
without the glimmer of fear

i can create all these journeys
all these places in my head,
but its made me tired and sleeply
time to go off to bed.

regards paul

Or meet the devil and rock That is a brilliant line!